Reviews for Perennial
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Wow, this is beautiful. You have some really fantastic lines in this - "Monday morning is gripping my windows," "What mirrors would justify me today?," and "Vanity swells beneath a dry winter/and bursts in time for spring" stand out to me. Just really fantastic ideas. Your verbs are strong, and that really helps bring this poem to life. Just great. Keep writing! :)