Reviews for Helena
deadaccount38289 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Although the big chunk of text is a little intimidating, this story is absolutely beautiful. It ties in the song wonderfully, and yet tells a story all its own at the same time. The imagery is wonderful and the ending is satisfying. Lovely, I'm favoriting this. :)
Carlette chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
I absolutely LOVE this song. I feel you captured the emotions of the song and mixed them in the story very well. Your descriptions are lovely :)

It definately touches the heart.
ReadTheBook chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Uhm, let me give you some critique...when a story is in format like that, with no spaces or indentations, it makes the readers become unfocused and it makes your story hard to read. Consider making indentations. I loved your story line, though. enthralling.