Reviews for Golden Bubble
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I love it! It's very cool, the way you described the bubble and the finger. It makes a good picture, for a moment. Then THE FINGER comes. duhduhduh.

So, I still think it's really well written. Very cool! I already said that, didn't I? Oh, well, I'm enforcing my point! Very well done!
tearing hands chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Beautiful. My favorite metaphor is the first one. "Petted" in the second last line seems a little awkward/out of place... I like the last line a lot, too.
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
wow, beautiful. great work.
Coolforever11Emily from Neo chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
"then you are the person who finally made it stop."

I don't like that line. You can make it so much stronger. Gah! If only you wrote novels, I would adore a novel by you!

And this one was great, I loved the metaphor. Nice, nice, nice. :)
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Wow. This was awesome. I loved it. Just the whole metaphors and everything. It was beautiful. Great job!
MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Exquisite! I really do love it, especially the begginning! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, writers block and vacationing! Hope to start writing soon!

Shayla :)
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
How unfortunate :(

I adore the comparisons/metaphors (which is it? :/)

*adds to faves*