|Reviews for Golden Bubble|
| IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I love it! It's very cool, the way you described the bubble and the finger. It makes a good picture, for a moment. Then THE FINGER comes. duhduhduh.
So, I still think it's really well written. Very cool! I already said that, didn't I? Oh, well, I'm enforcing my point! Very well done!
| tearing hands chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Beautiful. My favorite metaphor is the first one. "Petted" in the second last line seems a little awkward/out of place... I like the last line a lot, too.
| continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
wow, beautiful. great work.
| Coolforever11Emily from Neo chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
"then you are the person who finally made it stop."
I don't like that line. You can make it so much stronger. Gah! If only you wrote novels, I would adore a novel by you!
And this one was great, I loved the metaphor. Nice, nice, nice. :)
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Wow. This was awesome. I loved it. Just the whole metaphors and everything. It was beautiful. Great job!
| MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Exquisite! I really do love it, especially the begginning! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, writers block and vacationing! Hope to start writing soon!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
How unfortunate :(
I adore the comparisons/metaphors (which is it? :/)
*adds to faves*