|Reviews for Bitter Distaste|
| Emakoke chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Interesting! And a very original subject matter. I think as well as showing how movies can affect people, it shows how people always find something to put blame on. In Jane's case, it is movies.
I liked the simplicity, and the grammar and spelling was all perfect. The fact you named the movies made it very realistic. And I love the irony - they watched Casablanca, and it was beautiful, but Jane thinks it lead to something horrible.
"He went to fight in a war that he was against just years earlier." I think you could make the sentence a little clearer. Or maybe I'm just tired. xD Maybe "opposed to" instead of "against"? I'm not sure.
Anyway, great job! I really enjoyed it.