Reviews for The Harp
Emakoke chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
I loved this, Torz. The romance wasn't cheesy at all, and I *loved* the ending. It was kind of bittersweet, both sad but hopeful at the same time. The only thing you could do to improve it is correct some typos! But don't worry - typo girl is here to save us! DUN DUN DUN! *GASP*

As she feld - fled

He picked it up to examen it closer - examine

He wasn’t expectig her to be there - expecting

She’s simply beautifu,” he thought - beautiful

She dissapeared behind it, - disappeared

He had wondered since her first heard her singing. - he

The forsest was buring before their eyes - forest

That's about it! I really enjoyed reading this. ) Keep on writing Torz!