Ok. This is an alright story! Not the best one on fictionpress that I've read so far, but it is definitely better than most! You do have great potential as a writer!

But... Please spell-check your work before publishing it (just a friendly advice for you and your future stories :) ). It's spelled "too" not "to" when you are referring to: very (as in "you're too kind"), or likewise ( "I love you too!"). Also, England's Brighton is not spelled Bridgton! It took me ages to figure out what you meant! There are a couple of other things in the story that seem to suggest you wrote the whole story in a single night, just as I am about to finish reading it in a single night.

But overall, it's enjoyable! Good luck with your other stories!

LOVED IT!

It reminded me of one tree hill

It reminded me of one tree hill

NO!

REALLY REALLY REALLY don't want to stop reading, but seeing as it's nearly 5 in the morning...Great story! Can't wait to finish it!

OMG!

I think this is acctually one of THE best stories ive ever read on this. Scrap that its THE best im not joking when i say that I would buy this if it was a book! your an amazign writer and have a brilliant imagination. The story completley swallowed me up from the first time i began to read it I have been thinking about it when i wasnt. You brought yiur characters to life and i felt like i was falling in love with Dean along with Leigh. He was soo amazing the perfect guy he hurt her to keep her from being hurt. All he wanted was for her to be happy and he only hoped that she could be happy with him.

The only bad thing im going to say i was a little upset that shaun was gay, i dont know just felt a bit predictable:/

But other then that minor tinkle the story was WOW I cannot wait to read the sequeal i nearly cried when i was reading the last chapter and wondering if there was going to be a sequel.

AMAZING !

where's the sequel?

in your author note you mentioned that dean and leigh had to have a fight. i agree, but i think it was too soon for it because their realationship hasnt developed yet, so the fight they had was very premature.

Seems pretty good; I like it.

omgsh.. i luv this story! please write the sequel! cant wait! ]

ok the scene where shaun planned everythin else. yea u copied that from like a movie or somethin cuz this is very familiar to me

oh my gosh. I LOVED THIS!

:)

oh. that was so sweet. i want to read the sequel but i was never good on sequel so i might skip it and read it like later on or something.

It's about freaking time! Christ i have been so frustrated over it. i keep saying to my self. kiss dammit. but they dont and just. grr. it is too good for its own good :P really good