Reviews for Almost Unbeautiful
MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Amazingly powerful. So sad and beautiful. I really love your works!

Shayla
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
The imagery in this was very vivid and powerful. Loved it!
embarrassing-bs chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
"She pockets dirty green and walks away

Tainted again"

beautiful. it was filled with description and truth. I liked it a lot. Although the ending seems kinda of incomplete, but very complete at the same time. I don't know, maybe it's just me.

Thank you for your review.

I shall read more of your stuff!

Good job and keep on writing.
SirScott chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
That was sad, but that's the only way some women can make a living.

~SirScott
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Wow. I felt the emotion...

Don't worry, you're not the only person who writes strange things sometimes.

Rowan.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Sad... But it's a great description I think. I like it a lot too.