|Reviews for First Date|
| Kevin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
I loved the poem, first dates are like that.(I'd know) really saw the emotion of the moment there. Good job hope to see more stuff from you.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
This was really cute and sweet. You could see them both nervously, anxiously sitting there. Great job! Loved the emotions.
| Andy the Star chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
I love the way you captured that moment, and still left me wanting to know more! Hope you found love, and keep up the good work!