Reviews for Just Can't Take it Anymore |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your acrostics are always wonderful, but this one is... extra wonderful, I guess. Anyway, it's an amazing favourite. |
![]() ![]() Wow this has great form and also lovely vocabulary. I applaud your poem for i like it very much. Congrats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like. It feels ture. That donst make sence, but I will say it anyway. |
![]() ![]() I adored this one. It's got extreme emotion, excallent word-choice, and nice use of...everything! I love the "just can't take it anymore" for the begining letters...briliant! No critiques, sorry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was the best I think. This was really good. "It's never going to be over, will it?/The pain, the suffering, the hurt?" Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy moly. an acrostic that makes sense! :) the 'e' in take... i think you mean every, not ever the last stanza (anymore) are kind of creepy (the voices, and this poem makes me feel sad love the emotion in this |