Reviews for Just Can't Take it Anymore
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Your acrostics are always wonderful, but this one is... extra wonderful, I guess. Anyway, it's an amazing favourite.
Keara chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Wow

this has great form

and also lovely vocabulary.

I applaud your poem for i like it very much.

Congrats.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
I really like. It feels ture. That donst make sence, but I will say it anyway.
Coolforever11Emily from Neo chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I adored this one.

It's got extreme emotion, excallent word-choice, and nice use of...everything! I love the "just can't take it anymore" for the begining letters...briliant! No critiques, sorry!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
The ending was the best I think. This was really good. "It's never going to be over, will it?/The pain, the suffering, the hurt?" Great job.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
holy moly. an acrostic that makes sense! :)

the 'e' in take... i think you mean every, not ever

the last stanza (anymore) are kind of creepy (the voices, and this poem makes me feel sad

love the emotion in this