Reviews for This Isn't Love
Frames of Insight chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I like it. You portray the lust rather than describe just the difference between lust and love. Very effective approach.
TylerB chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Wow this is brilliant. It really is! If only more people could understand the vast difference between love and lust. It isn't until the last part that you really get your point across.

"without love to hold on" It brings up alot of memories I think I'd just rather forget.

Great write, I really enjoy your poetry!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Nice write! I so agree. Forcing someone into loving you is NOt the same thing as love.

Rowan.
SirScott chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Just a few minor changes to the poem you could have needed it with the words This is love. There's really not much difference between love and lust. The two are not entirely separate things.

SirScott