|Reviews for Locked In The Corner|
| TylerB chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
You portray real care and understanding for someone who seems so bad off quite clearly. It seems to drag on a bit in the middle but still a solid write. You do get the most important thing right though. You do an excellent job of portraying the mood. Another winner.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
You cannot save those who do not wish to be saved. Like the old saying goes, you can lead a horse to water but you cannot make him drink.
| EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Wow, this is really good! That's a good motto, "save the one's who can't save themselves." The world doesn't usually see our pain, but this is how we show it. Great writing! keep writing!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I liked it...but I wasn't a big fan of the "baby girl/baby boy" start of lines. Just me, maybe.