Reviews for Smell of Rain
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
that was beautiful. there were so many lines i loved - the angels with the fists was so haunting and the last two lines were beautiful. it's really effective having the tears on its own line as it really emphasises it.

everyone's been writing about the rain! it's a good topic, this is one of the good ones!
Melanie Layugan chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
O_o. I'm speechless. In a good way. Will need some time to think. Oh.. Blue you've captured the dark sound of rain. Keep it up.

Melanie
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
oh wow, i love this. great work, a favorite for sure.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
softsoft rain

i think it is raining right now
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
i like the use of onomatopoea in this. it is well written although i wouldnt personally write that the rain trickles across her face like tears, bcuz it seems contradictory to me. after all, you're saying that rain is soothing her bruises, but usually, tears represent pain, so how can rain be soothing and in one sense - painful - at the same time? anyway, i liked the overall feel of it ;)

take care,

mez