|Reviews for Ageing|
| OfflineForever chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
I read about this one woman who sang in a country band when she was a hundred and twenty years old! Imagine that.
I have to say that this poem reflects a lot of our feelings, but I think you could work on it more to make it more imposing :) Or perhaps not - perhaps it is perfect the way it is!
I'm terrified of growing old also. I mean, just look at how these old people walk... they're practically inching toward their own graves!
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
You sound exactly like my sister. She actually has a fear of really old people. I find it hilarious. I don't think I will mind being old too much. It will be annoying having all those health problems. Haha, oh well. I liked this poem though. And thanks for your review! Great job.
| sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Huh. You sound like my brother. He does not believe in living over 60 or something.
One correction: "Stories told by a rasping dry tongues." Don't you mean "by rasping dry tongues" or "by a rasping dry tongue"?