Reviews for Self Portrait
Ember Swish chapter 6 . 6/22/2007
Wow, that was good, I was planning on only reading the first chapter, but it was to good to stop, update soon!
i-rite-gud chapter 6 . 5/11/2007
Oh. Creepy ending line :S I lovededed the chapter! . I like the new name, although I must say that I don't see its connection to the story... Will it become apparent later on? Or is it just a nifty name?

I get it about the earring now :) lol. hmmn. I think it would have been very neat if to prove she was a genetic experiment, Mute had shown Nolen her healed ear. Seeing as how her ear had been slit open and all.. Anyways. Enough of my ramblings :) Again, I loved the chapter! I can't wait until the end of May/beginning of June when you update! :)
Missing Information chapter 6 . 5/3/2007
I don't think it sucks... I changed my pen name... I like it much better now (previously Dani Casster) Anyways, update when you get a chance.

Later!
i-rite-gud chapter 5 . 4/18/2007
Oh, perfect soldier? That is so nifty o.O So Mute is a genetic experiment... How did the earring prevent her from revealing the information? That's a little confusing.

Awesome chapter! . I loved it and I can't wait until you update again! :)
Sunshine Knight chapter 5 . 4/15/2007
oh wow! nice surprise there. can't wait for u to update

Chrys
Missing Information chapter 5 . 4/15/2007
WOW! Unexpected twist... genetic experiment? KEWL! This story is so interesting; I can't wait to read more, so update soon. Please?

Later
Missing Information chapter 4 . 4/14/2007
OMG! Thats so good! I like the story plot so far and I can't wait for the next chapter; please update soon!

Later,

Dani
Sunshine Knight chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
oh, i like the cliffy. update asap. PLEASE?

Chrys
i-rite-gud chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Oh... I wonder what the military guy is there for... Is it because of Mute, perhaps? hmnn... I guess I'll have to wait and find out! I LOVED the chapter! I can't wait until you update again, this is getting so good!
i-rite-gud chapter 2 . 4/8/2007
A one-year-old who looks seven? :O AND is supposed to die on her first birthday? What is this? o, now I am very, VERY curious as to what is going on... I LOVED the chapter, it was AWESOME! . Please try to update again soon, I can feel the intensity building with the suspense!
Sunshine Knight chapter 2 . 4/7/2007
u have my interst. can't wait for the update!

Chrys
sunscraped chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
It's very Catcher in the Rye, which is one of my favourite books.

Good job and good luck with your story.
i-rite-gud chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
:O ohmygosh. The ending of this chapter was actually like, so amazing. "Tears continue to tumble from the sky, beating down on the girls’ small body." What an incredible line. Really. I'm jealous of your skill :O Please update soon! I really wanna find out what happens next!