| Reviews for Yes, We're Open |
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   ricco-the-penguin chapter 1 . 6/2/2007 I like this a lot. very interesting. :D |
| roxaroni chapter 1 . 5/7/2007 ...lol ur usern4me sux. Change it. My god at least take off the jarring capitals. How how how 'bout... hm 태? It's "tae" in korean and if you don't have asian language on it's a box and how awesome would it be to have a box as a username? 8D huh-huh? YEAH I KNOW GENIUS. ... Oh yeah and story's good, you know like usual. |
| Cealex chapter 1 . 4/10/2007 Lol nice. Your style of writing reminds me of the author/book we're doing in english class right now. East West by Rushdie. Heard of it before? It's cuz he sorta reveals things bit by bit, slowly letting you know more, and then at the end it's like OH I GET IT! sort of thing. Your story did sorta the same thing with the whole, revealing they know each other more than the readers think they do. Yay, good job |
| no account chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 awesome story. i love the fact that your characters are flawed makes them more than one-dimensional. excellent. |
| EmeraldEyes89 chapter 1 . 4/7/2007 This is a really interesting story. I think it has potential for more. I'd love to see more from it. |
| LifeisCereal chapter 1 . 4/7/2007 Wow... you should turn this to s full on story |