Reviews for Butterfly Girl
Lumynescence chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Oh! This is my favorite from you so far! *Adds to favorite author's list*. I had very interesting images in my head while reading this, butterfly's for one and a girl in the other. Your laungage was powerful, and I love how the poem tells a story, with an awesome ending. I really liked it, keep writing!
Undrahas chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
wow. this was really good.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
I noticed in your profile you said Kavita means poem in Hindu...yeah, no. It means poem in Hindi. A Hindu is a person who practices the religion of Hinduism.

Your poem is pretty good.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
This is so beautifully written. I love the metaphor of the butterfly, and the imagry throughout is great. I love the emotion in this piece. Very powerful. Great work, I really like this a lot. Keep writing!
Jordygirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
That

is

beautiful.

It made me want to cry. Seriously.