where did u get the maid?

Not bad. I like the title, because usually it's the unimaginable foe which is written about. The title doesn't quite have to do with the poem, however. I can see this poem as a fun thing in a kid's magazine. Unless you're going for surrealism "The sound becomes distant" doesn't make much sense. Should it be 'sound becomes close'? I mean, it sounds really nice, but it doesn't match the atmosphere of the rest of the poem. "going like through a time tunnel." has potential to be very nice and creative imagery but "going like" is way way too vague and unskilled. Give me a good verb there. Clarify "Suddenly, something attacks me." "who I kicked and punched." could be gone without; maybe put some movement of the maid's to show that she was the 'monster', because the reader can probably guess that is coming after the last few lines about the light. I do like how it's "only the maid" and not the kid's mom, because that gives a characterization to the location. So, this needs some work, but it's got potential.