They never found his body after the accident, did they?

UPDATE SOON!

good job, can't wait for more! My only question, why are the chapters all messed up on the thing? Just wondering!

Faith

Great job. I got an alert saying you posted chapter twelve (fourteen for your chapters) but FP won't let me read it... how sad. Anyways, I love this! But you made a mistake.

This:“Sophia Elizabeth, He whispers

Should be" "Sophia Elizabeth," he whispers

I like how you made Noah angry and the way he was the quiet angry person. And it's brilliant that she thinks he an hallucination the whole time. And the final paragraph was fabulous, amazing. Please udpate soon. And if you already posted ch. 12, FP won't let me read it, so could you email it to me if it's not too much?

Again, Update!

Alright dears, I'm sorry I freaked out on that last post...it's just...it's a long story, and it hurts to talk about. But everything in my book is true. Myself, Meredith, fell in love with himself, Edward.

A few moths later his ex girlfriend returned and announced she was three months pregnant with Edward's baby. HE left to be with her because he was convinced it was the right thing to do, not to mention he knew he had the disease Lupus as well as a brain tumor. Two weeks after he left to be with her and his brother in another city, the brain tumor caused an aneuyrism, and he died on the way to the hospital.

and...that's it. the rest of my book is really just wishful thinking and dreams of him...make sense?

thank you.

((p.s.- i may stop writing this book for a bit...i'm not sure yet. let me know if you have strong feelings about me NOT stopping, please? if no one objects, I may start work on another i've been seriosly considering entitled Impressions of a Young Man ( or just) IMpressions. comments? questions? feel free to ask!

writerblock ( Mere)

No.

I did not get inpiration from Twilight and New Moon, although I will admit that Twilight is my favorite book...and actually had everything to do with how I met Edward Bailey, the boy whom Noah is based upon. Stephenie Meyer is my hero, honestly, and her writing inpsires me. I've been told i write a lot like her, withint the same writing style. I've also been told that Edward (Bailey, that is) and my relationship mirrors that of Bella and Edwards very closely.

And yes, I do realize that this chaopter in particular is very very similar to one in the book New Moon. But no, it was not copied. And it was not stolen from her. This story is my own, real life story. My Edward died a month ago. I miss him. This story is my grieving process.

That's all I want to say about that, though please. I really...miss him alot. ( and it is PURE COINICIDENCE that his name happens to be Edward as well, and he was very similar to Stepehnie's character Edward Cullen in life...funny, right)

Thank you for your input and questions.

THis is my answer. If you don't believe me, that's alright. But please, repect my work...don't accuse me of stealing ideas...please.

Just curious... did you get inspiration for this from stephenie meyers new moon and twilight?

thank you all for your kindw rods and encouragement

but let me just make one coment

Sophie is not a relaist. She's dreamy, she lives in her own world all the time. When she sees Noah, she convinces herself he's just part of her imagination. She isn't frightened yet because she thinks she's still dreaming. Noah to her is still dead, and what she sees is just a projection of missing him. She doesn't understand (yet) that what she's seeing really is her boyfriend Noah. She doesn't understand yet that he is in fact, a ghost.

make more sens? hope so!

keep reading and reviewing, loves!

Ah, you can't leave it there! He didn't even say what he was! Umm, the only thing I find you should work on, is the realness of the story. Like, if I saw my dead boyfriend in my room, I wouldn't be as calm as Sophie appeared. I'd be screaming, cursing, telling myself I'm insane and just walking outof the room. So I think you should maybe work on how she's affected by all this. Hope that made sense :)

Faith

Update soon.

very enchanting story...i like it alot. its formal writing, but i dunno reminds me of how Twilight was written. kep going.

it's not a bad chapter. ). In fact, I say it was your best one. Cute. ;D.

Curse you! Or maybe not b/c then you won't be able to continue. :) God, you make Noah sound so DREAMY! Is this Noah a ghost or what?

UPDATE SOON!

hauntingly beautiful

WHATT? Update asap, that was an evil cliffy haha. Keep it up :)

Faith

Oh My God no way dude!

This one made me a lil spooked. hehe. and finally, I can review!

...He came back!

I hate cliffes!

Grr...

XD Update soon?

Oh, I love how you put the preface in there! Great job. FP was being weird and wouldn't send me alerts to this story, but all the other chapters were great. Please update soon!