Reviews for To Love A Shadow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello everyone, Writers here... and yes, this is my story. I just wanted to let everyone know Chapter six is coming very soon, and I'm working very hard to make sure its everything it should be! Also, I added quite a large section onto the end of Chpater 5. haha, when I said "to be continued..." i meant the actual chapter, dears. P.S. - this story is based off of something that happened to me very recently. I lost the love of my life in early March, and this is for him. I'm telling our story to give voice to my love for him. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy what's coming up next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a little short, but at least you updated! Great job. I like how Lucy is the character who lets us know about how Sophie was special to Noah. Sophie seems to be struggling with Noah's death in a different way than Lucy. I mean, Lucy goes through the sadness, but then she is able to let go for a while, but Sophie can't seem to get Noah out of her head. The poor girl. Please tell me the next chapter tells us something about the note, where she's going, who sent it (Noah?), and what happens when she goes to the place the note tells her to. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful chapter. It's a sad concept, but there is also a soft glimmer of hope for Sophie. I like it :) ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story! Very excited. Please continue soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story. it's concise and fast pace. excellent read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic job! I love this. Stories written in first person present tense are my favorite. So, what does the letter say? When will we see Noah? Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need more. Desperately. This is an excellent story! I can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter really advanced the plot. I'm really really enjoying reading this. It's hard to find well-written, intelligently plotted stuff on FictionPress. You're doing an amazing job. ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter. It was touching...drew me closer to the characters. Good job! ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heartbreaking. You write incredibly well. You really capture the feelings of the characters. Off to read the next chapter! ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great beginning. I'm already enraptured. ~carm~ |