| Reviews for In the Spotlight |
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   bookwormhottie chapter 1 . 9/28/2008 love it already! |
| Abbygrl chapter 19 . 1/24/2008 So, I don't have much time to write this review...but, I will try my best to get my points across. Let me tell you at the beginning that this is my review for chapter 1-19 because I started about 2 days ago and read it straight through (i even read at school :)). I enjoyed this story. I liked the pace of it, and I could tell that it was revised to make the story more believable and entertaining. One thing that was off for me was the fact that Bruce had such a hard time trusting Hannah again. I mean, I know she made a mistake, but he got SO upset by it. I don't know, but that was one thing that stuck in my mind. I thought that you developed Hannah's character extremely well. Her actions represented the kind of character that she is. Well, I have to go, but I will finish my review in my review for the epilogue. But, I really loved this story. One of my top ten favorites! |
| under the influence chapter 18 . 1/16/2008 good update...I'm confused though...I thought there was going to be a family birthday dinner for Eve...when did the party come about? was there a mention of it and I missed it? Another question: in the summary, it says Hannah is reeling from a break-up. With Caleb or Bruce? |
| under the influence chapter 17 . 12/3/2007 who is Helen again? |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 16 . 11/7/2007 Great chapter...Greg's falling for her ouch...two people after the same girl...I cant wait to read the next chapter. update soon! |
| redjello chapter 16 . 11/7/2007 Great story! "What is love without trust?" I like that... You're a great writer... Krey |
| under the influence chapter 16 . 11/7/2007 yay! you updated |
| under the influence chapter 15 . 10/29/2007 Honestly, this chapter felt a bit forced. Don't get me wrong, I still found it good...but I can tell when I write a chapter just to be able to say I wrote it... |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 15 . 10/29/2007 great chapter...I like it so far...cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update soon |
| Water Archer Princess chapter 15 . 10/28/2007 hey...loved your story. Please update soon...ΓΌ |
| Dancing In Magic chapter 3 . 10/13/2007 Really good, I can't wait to see more, I review more later! |
| under the influence chapter 14 . 10/11/2007 I'm still rooting for Greg...sorry... good chappie nonetheless |
| under the influence chapter 13 . 9/22/2007 good chapter...the commas seemed a little excessive, but the chapter flowed well. |
| under the influence chapter 12 . 9/14/2007 I'm interested to see how the scene will play out... by the way, sometimes when the characters are talking, it gets confusing to remember who's who because there isn't a line that says who is speaking. |
| under the influence chapter 11 . 9/14/2007 Uh oh... As much as I like Bruce, I have to admit that I find something endearing about Greg... |