ok well I read the other verisons you had up and this is way better. The style is much improved, and the writing is more umm for lack of a better word grown up. This is wonderful keep up the good work!

~Lucy

Hannah is definitely better than I am...

When you refer to Caleb, you might want to try to be more consistent with what you call him.

this story is well written. I like the first person account...:)

Good chappie...

interesting start...I'm a bit confused as to the 'experiment', but I'm sure it will become clearer as I read more...

Another good chapter. I didn't have any problems with it, other than the fact it was a bit dull.

Update soon,

Dev.

Another cute chapter. I actually didn't have to drag myself through this one, it read itself.

Dev.

update

great story!

Another cute chapter. I like Claire a lot. She seems eccentric, but down to earth.

Update soon,

Dev.

tis good. i'm sleepy. i wish school was over already... my cousin goes to school year round oh the horror! i think i'd die from exposure to stupidity if i were to attend my school year round. anyway, tar and feather that annoying git christian. as for the actual story, i applaud you. i like it. update soon.

So cute! Although, not liking the "dear" and "honey" exchange there at the end. XP But it is an adorable story.

And now, next comes the terrible something or other that screws them all over...

Can't wait. ;)

Devione.

I like this, very much.

Again, good job editing. There are little to know mistakes.

Hannah's a bit annoying sometimes, but Bruce is cool.

Nice job, update soon!

Devione.

aw...only friends? lol...update soon! I loved the chapter!

bec

Sounds interesting. I don't generally read stories about celebrities, so this should be different. No noticeable errors- you did a good job editing.

I'll keep reading, then! :)

Devione.

So. Nina's her friend... But Caleb cheated on her with her? Is Hannah going to be angry with her? She should.

But, this story is by far one of my favorites. Keep up the good work!