| Reviews for In the Spotlight |
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   somuchformyhappyending chapter 5 . 4/21/2007 hey! I really liked this. and if I were hannah I would've punched caleb SO hard. even if he WAS in the hospital. bec |
| somuchformyhappyending chapter 4 . 4/20/2007 great chapter! update soon! bec |
| Miss-Scissorhands chapter 4 . 4/20/2007 Surprisingly, the end of the chapter didn't make me TOO uncomfortable. I thought it was going to be way worse, but hoped it wouldn't be. I like that you keep putting in that she wants to stay a virgin. The way you conveyed Bruce's knowledge about Hannah was really good, too. But now it's at a cliffhanger, so I'm in suspense-update soon! |
| otter pop chapter 3 . 4/17/2007 I love this story. It's great. And Bruce is creepy. Haha. Does he know about her being Hannah? 'Cause I get the feeling he does. Hm... |
| somuchformyhappyending chapter 3 . 4/16/2007 great chapter! and Bruce DOES come off as a little creepy...I'd probably be more frightened than Hannah was. anyways, I hope you update soon! bec |
| Luv-TU chapter 2 . 4/11/2007 I like it! |
| Miss-Scissorhands chapter 2 . 4/10/2007 This start was okay. I think it went way too fast and I didn't like the couple mild profanities. Other than that, it was good. Keep going! |
| somuchformyhappyending chapter 2 . 4/10/2007 great chapter! I really hope you update soon! bec |
| The Cat Died Nobly chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 Hmm. Looks good/interesting. Looking forward to the update. |
| somuchformyhappyending chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 I really liked this. I haven't read your other versions, but I'm sure this once was much improved. I like your writing style a lot and I think you picked a good, exciting plot. good luck and I look foward to your updates! bec |
| otter pop chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 I LOVE the idea/ very original. D |