Reviews for Toenails
Definition chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Aww! This is so adorable and cute - made me smile :) I like the originality and uniqueness of it as well. Fav.
MollyMo chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
that was pretty cute. HAHA
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
So.. I was going to leave a review, but I couldn't think of what to say. I told myself that I'd get a cup of coffee and then I'd try to find a way to say that this is an excellent poem, but instead I started singing "Trolley Wood" and trying on my rockstar incognito glasses. They're huge, ha ha. And as I stated in a horribly written retelling, the poem was excellent. I'm going to continue to show my inner fan girl and add this to my favorites. I swear, the more I take off the more I add.
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Nice stable contrast.

The line "to protect the boy" makes me feel like the subject doesn't really make the decision to paint his toenails, like he's just an audience.
waitandhope chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
I'm not sure what there is to say about this... except that I like it. I really do. :)
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
god this is cute and well written.

i can just imagine this boy in my head

excellent job portraying your character!
Dani Bear chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
sad but cute :)