I keep coming back to check if you’ve updated and am
Still hoping one day you will! I love Emmeline and Evan and can’t wait to see where the story goes. If you decide to publish or move it elsewhere please let us know!

I like it .. like other readers I too was wondering why it is not finished. But looking back I guess it can be completed only if the Gracie and Jack pair was given equal importance as Evan might be the party of guilty. And to be honest Gracie seems to be more heroic than the rest of the characters. Em seems to be selfish while comparing her with Gracie. The only option is giving Jack and Gracie's love an equal importance. But the story flow missed it.

Hey, so... I realize this hasn't been updated in almost 10 years. But here I am, nearly 10 years later, still thinking about it and wishing I knew what happened next, haha. Are there any plans to ever finish it and/or publish it? I desperately want to be able to read and reread it whenever I want!

~Chelsea

This is so not fair! I fell in love with this story, with Evan and Emeline, only for it to drop off like that. I know it's been 7 years, but PLEASE FOR PETE'S SAKE FINISH THIS!

aaaaw! I know this was updated last 2008, but I hope that you would be able to finish this story. :) Its a really good story. :)

why did you stop?

Wow, I really hope that you still see these and that you may come back to finish this. It is soo good and then you got to this point and completely twisted everything around and now I am wondering how this turns out, please come back and finish.

This is undoubtedly one of my favourite stories on fp and it's pretty obvious why. The mix of crime, suspense and romance is tantalising and I really can't wait to see how Evan and Em will make it unscathed... In more ways than one. I've read this storey since its beginning, but never really bothered to review. I'd been hoping you'd update but after rediscovering it yesterday and in the absence of updates, just know that there are still some of us out here who care shout the story and hope to see another chapter come out. No pressure (i'll just re-read what's already been written) and all the best!

I really like this.. Really.

I really like thissz

Great story so far! I hope that you update soon! :)

Peace, LOve and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

i need to know what happens! curiosity is not good for me, its worse than what happens to the cat. it slowlly tortures me. its been more than two years since youve last updated? :O

why is it that whenever authors say that theyre gonna update sooner, they end up not updating at all? oddity innit? break away from the norm! your story (and i) need you to!

have i mentioned how much i love this story? well i do.

yuck. banana icecream with chocolate shavings? i dont blame evan for not wanting to try anymore after that. whats wrong with good old cookie dough. or chocolate. m belgian chocolate is the BEST. i want icecream now.

Aah this is awesome! i love this! i am so glad that i clicked on the button that lead me to here.

the part where she said "oh god. im going to die" would have made a good cliffie. although if i was reading it right after you posted it and i had to wait for another chapter, i would have hated it.

ok i have to go read the next chapter now :)

i have to say this story is one of the story that have the best plot here in FP.

good love stories are amazing read. but an action packed one? it's heaven,really. i love every second reading ur story.

u leave us a big clifie there. is there any chance u will update this? it's been more than 2 years since u last updated but i still hope u will finish this amazing captivating story.