Reviews for Winter's First Freeze
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
wow didnt even notice that it rhymed at first actually, very pretty and sad, i really love the last bit of it and being left on the lawn, i dunno, well done
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
wow... i can relate to this. something beautiful can be so short-lived. good poem

keep writing
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
This was beautiful and sad. I loved everything about it, and I could really sense your emotions. Probably because I really relate to this a lot. But mine seemed to be a winter love, and summer came all too soon. Great job on this, I enjoyed it.
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Sad but an awesome job just the same. Thanks for the kind reviews. Write on.