wow.

this was... amazing.

really sad- but very well written D

Oh, God, that was really good. I felt so bad for Jamie! That stinks that he even began cheating on her, but even more so, it sucks because she's so miserable now that she knows it. Are you going to continue with the story, or was it a one-shot?

Poor Jamie...I hate whoever that man is. Jamie seems like such a wonderful person. Anyway, that was a beautifully written piece that I really enjoyed reading. The description and the vocabulary you use are really exquisite. I felt the emotion the main character, and his struggle. Oh, and I loved the last line. Great job! :)

Lovely. Just ... lovely. So incredibly bittersweet, and the length worked really well, too! You managed to pack a lot of feeling into a few pages, and I applaud you for that. Keep writing!

Utterly beautiful. And sad. You played with the emotions very well with this. Great job.