Reviews for Unbalanced
abandoned and forgotten chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Very, very expressful...and somehow I can empathize. Good job!

Alya
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Excellent as always.

Rowan.
SirScott chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
We are pretty small compared to the universe. I agree that it is amazing that we claim to own it when we can't even touch it.

SirScott
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Wow, as I was reading it, i actually began to feel smaller, great write!
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
"Midnight kisses of arguments with/Those ever-silent stars speaking/Unknown philosophies and condemnations" strikingly perfect and beautiful

(you have an amazing gift)

love the connection it makes when i read it; great way to bring this poem to a close

fantastic job!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
I love the ending. Beautiful wording.

Lovely job as always.