Reviews for Thin Lines Between Human Observation and Stalking
merrymowmow chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
NekoRinChan chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Yay! I was beginning to miss your writing. .o Anyhoo. I likee! D -Roll.- (( Omg at the sucky, short review. ))
Shindo Shuichi chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
xD! Continue this please. Because. This. Is. Good. And. Funny!

So I hope that this idea is like shining brightly because it totally rocks and I hope that it goes on! And also good luck for the Writer's Workshop!

Shindo

Nyu
Pavlove chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Writer's workshop, here you come! :D

Yes, it's an interesting first chapter. I'd read the whole story through.

However, by the abundant use of the first person, the main characters (or what you announced as main characters) seem more like props. And we already know more about the supposedly mysterious watcher than we should know by the denouement...

But I'm just being nitpicky. Do this your own way, you're a good enough writer to pull it off .
The Forgotten Child chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Hummn, I think it was great!

A little mind boggling at first, but as a whole piece, it's strung together with a mysterious flareā€¦

All in all a very good write.