|Reviews for What a wonderful world|
| Written chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
haha, this is very cute! your main character has this way about her... very strong voice :)
| akb-inactive chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Aw, haha, it was sweet. Although the girl wasn't exactly a favorable character for me, there was just something about all the "Die!" comments that irked me. But I do like her ideals on nature and the environment. :)
Another line, that you could probably edit:
[Then he sat on the one beside it, while I nursed my aching ass.]
The word 'ass' here, sort of... throws off the 'semi-romantic' vibe you have going on. But it's ok, it was really minor. :)
| dare me chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
i felt this warm fuzzy feeling inside me when i read it.
| yoh01 chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
The summary's catchy...
And I find this story VERY cute!
It's the first thing I read here in this site and I'm glad.
Plus, the whole point of "I AM courting you" and "I AM marrying you" is what made it perfect!
I understand your author's note though. I once "accidentally" destroyed flowers that were given to me, too.