Reviews for I dont have a title yet! read me!
Bethiec1387 chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I like it! I think all need now is a title! haha!(although that is pretty creative!)
Ron A. Liner chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
I dont think there's anything you should fix either. It sounds like the beginning of a good story or something.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
This is a beautiful poem! I don't see what could've been different with it. From line one through to the end, you write with such emotion! And the words you chose, and the rhyming makes it even greater! It'll go in my favorites. Keep writing, Lisa!

The Reverse Edge Blade