|Reviews for Gotcha!|
| honey splattered brains chapter 6 . 1/21/2009
hahaha i love the ending part of this chaptur xD
| Subbie chapter 6 . 10/21/2008
hehe. I like luci. he tries very unsubtly to hit on gabriel...
well probably not unsubtly. but whatever!
Anyways, can't wait for more!
| Would not Could not in a Box chapter 6 . 9/4/2008
| vampirezombieduck chapter 6 . 4/20/2008
| Daydream Nation chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
| Shadowy Fluffball chapter 6 . 1/23/2008
| Sunshine Bear chapter 6 . 11/24/2007
I would love to share my thoughts when I was reading this but some are vary... messed up. So I won't share them.
Though I LOVE this story and I want to eat it with some marshmellows.. That was one of my weird thoughts.
| Switch chapter 6 . 10/14/2007
Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out! _
| merrymowmow chapter 6 . 8/9/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
| purple sea chapter 6 . 5/19/2007
this is so funny, update soon?
| ks darkstorm chapter 6 . 5/14/2007
Really awesome, I love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. More soon?
| Ekath chapter 6 . 4/29/2007
“‘God is my strength!’”
“‘The father’s joy!” - Yeah, I'd be freaked out to. LOL
Tiny errors: “So, where’s you girlfriend?” & “You parents asked..." - 'you' should be 'your'.
| FreewayofFlight chapter 6 . 4/26/2007
This is really cool, I like the plot twist! Waiting for 7!
| no account chapter 6 . 4/24/2007
what's the line he is repeatedly typing? i love the line, "I'm practicing for when I write the real thing." "God is my strength!" and "The father's joy!" is also brilliant. you are a good writer with a talent for the quirky, as if you haven't heard that tired old cliche before.
| Faerie Tales chapter 6 . 4/23/2007
Once more, your strong and quirky characters leave me fair cross when the chapter ends. I love the way this is going, and I love the slants towards religion, keeps any story good. I'm pretty happy with this, it being the only fictionpress story I still read. Good job!