Excellent! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I can't wait for more. You employ very good imagery; you also have an excellent grasp on how to portray different scenes. The more violent scenes were done superbly. I anticipate the rest of this story.

~Bri

update soon it's really awsome

O_O update soon

awesome i like it so is he really going to send her back or will he keep her.

i think im madly in love with ayden did you know that? and i LOVE karen - she is so funny, i know few red heads, but suprusingly none of them are that...rambunctious? she reminded me of me a little but though - strange! anyway i loved it and not i love you for updateing! oops updating doens's have an 'e' in it does it? oh well you undertand what i am trying to say. KEEP UPDATING! please?

Love the chapter.

wow that was amazing! but you have to update like now! you should check out some of my stuff as soon as fidtionpress lets me put stuff on it, but anyway seriously check back by christmas and review. anyway i love the whole vampire angst thing, very cool. do you like buffy and angel by chance, i think you would, LOTS of vampire angst there, anyway update...NOW! please?

You should update this it's really good.

Interesting story. Can't wait to see what happen next.

the story sound very interesting!

so far I really like it.

I really, really like this, need...MORE!

I didn’t like Chapter 1. Some parts seemed cheesy/silly to me—mainly the way you describe things. Maybe you could work on it?

I didn’t read Chapter 2; I just read the summary that you provided. Hehe, it was incredibly nice of you to provide a summary for people who don’t like violent scenes.

I liked Chapter 3. You made Ayden an interesting character. I think I also like your plot.

Keep writing. :)

i like it

This is very good. I like where its going, keep it up

please tell me you are going to update the story really really soon