|Reviews for Tones of Grief|
| Pigfarts chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
I was beautiful how you put the same thought for the mum and the daughter. Well done.
| London Dupre chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
You do a nice job describing the grief of Gabrielle. The only problem I could pick out would be the use of past tense. Instead of "Gabrielle had gone..." for example, you could use "Gabrielle went..." I don't know. Maybe it's just an issue of preference. Your description is good, your detail is nice and subtle-the way I like it. I'll keep my eyes peeled for updates.