Reviews for When You Wish Upon a Star
catalyst.enigma chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Beauty in every line.
Nine-Black-Roses chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
wow this is a really sad poem

its strtong and you have

some really good metaphors

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Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
This poem really hit home for me. It was intense to read and hurt a lot. Just the feelings you've brought back in your simple words and phrases. "The stars will dampen beneath my gaze" or "While the stars are killing crickets/(And the hopeful songs they carry.)

Especially this one:

"Someday these words will reach you/And you'll realize that your happiness was all that mattered,/(Even if it killed me a little inside.)

Great job.