|Reviews for The Underdogs|
| woundedwarriorwondering chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Great detail, it helps the the imagination.
| TK Anez chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
| lijuan chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
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| ernest chapter 8 . 5/31/2008
| LocalMedicalFacility chapter 8 . 5/21/2008
I must say, this is very well written. I've never seen a main character that was an underground fighter and a girl. I like the twists and I look forward to the next chapter!
| MatsuGlare chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
this one is really excellent, i tell you! I'm happy you told me about your fic. I totally love it!~ hehehe...your characters are very unique, especially Jenna...i so love her! haha...i can't imagine how they became bestfriends! Anyway, the plotline is very original and your writing style is really superb. I just have finished reading chapter 1 and i gotta say i'll add this one on my faves...updates please! )
| Tnayoub chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
So far this story seems original with the main character being a 14-year-old underground fighter...weird. Anyway, the dialogue seems to fit the mannerisms of a young, rebellious teenager.
However, the prank call to that girl's ex at the end of this chapter did sound a little unrealistic. It seemed like it went too fast...like his reaction should've been more shocking or something.
| BriRy chapter 7 . 12/23/2007
this story is going great so far. please continue it, i'm very intrigued and can't wait to see what happens next.
| Guagna chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Wow. The prolouges intense! I can't wait to read the rest ]
| Melissa Norvell chapter 7 . 8/8/2007
Another grand chapter! Keep up the good work!
| Jason chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
You are great.
Love, Minkles and Jason hahahaha
Darc, I only read the prologue, because that's all I have the attention span for, but I liked it. I hope you get lots of positive reviews and get your book published and become famous..and share some of your money with me to buy cookies P.
Jason (your best friend before you became famous)
| ernest chapter 7 . 8/2/2007
Pretty intense story. It's starting to get exciting. Finally.
More cursing please.
| Nero91 chapter 2 . 7/25/2007
This is a very cool story, Tak is an interesting character, and the story flows very well, I'll have to read the next chapter soon, thanks for reviewing my story.
| BriRy chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
wow, i just read the prolouge and that was very impressive. very detailed and descriptive. it looks like this will be good. i'll come back and read more and give you more of my thoughts in the very near future.
| Melissa Norvell chapter 5 . 7/23/2007
This...Is really good. It's nice to see a story that is actually well-written around here. There are so few that are actually good (most poorly written and horribly clich'ed) I'm definitely going to put this on my alerts list so I can follow future chapters.
If you have the time or simply want to, feel free to check out some of my works.