This is powerful and... wow. The rhymes were so good and natural I didn't even notice it rhymed until I reread it... Incredible job... This is well written, intense, and amazing. It made me think of a paper I'm writing about drugs, and how I just wrote the part about alcohol. Great job... Really.

Oh my, I'm so sorry. I know plenty of people who have died from alcohol related incidents. This is really good, even if you don't think so. I can see why it means a lot to you. I loved your rhyming, and I agree with you one hundred percent. Just shake your head...why is that so hard for some people to do? Very true, very well written. Hugs!