I liked this, its really out of the ordinary. I hope you update soon.

so far this fic seems cool..very intriguing.

i think you have a nice beginning here

and i also think you have better grammar than a pig

maybe a few spelling/typing erros, but a pig doesn't even come close

please post more when you have it

Wow that's some spunky girl. How old is the vampire (or how long has he been a vampire)?

cute story. ;] update soon

Okay, two questions, M'Dear.

1) Do you know that a pig has more grammatical accuracy than you?

and

2) Would you like some help fixing that?

-sighs- Good story, but promise you'll keep updating the others? I like Charm as a charecter, she's really stubborn, like me! :D