Reviews for To Our Ears
In the Rye chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
It seems your idea was lost in wanting to sound poetic. It's rather discombobulated.
Please Deactivate chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
I definately anticipated something more corny that what is here. However, now that I have read and reread what you have written in this poem, I find that when in love, there is less to strain the mind and the body, in pure love, what this poem is beginning to describe, the spirit is free. You may not want praise, I don't know, but I cannot help it here, your words have spoken to me, and my applause shall now speak to you.