Ok first off, this story is great! It differs from others in a way that the main character isn't an innocent person who gets hurt by guy and has screaming matches with another girl who likes the same person. It's a breath of fresh air.

Secondly, I feel so sorry for Mia yet she deserves what she's going to get. Secrets are going to be let out and crap will hit the fan and it's not going to be very pretty for her. This story just makes me torn when it comes to Mia - to feel sorry for her, or to hate her. And for a writer, that's when you know you have a good plot and characters.

Anyway, I hope you update soon!

-Innocence

Wow this is really good. I was searching randomly for some stories to see if this site had really high maintenance authors so to speak, and you completely conviced me!

Anyway, I would really like to know what will happen next. Espeically if he ever finds out about her 28,0$ lie.

Update soon:)

amazing ...wenz da nxt chater comin up!

i dint get 1 thing y is she helpin landon ?

i really like the beginning. can't wait to find out what happens... :)

ah! it cant just end like that, i must know what happens next! please get back to this story!

hey

wow awesome first chapter, cant wait to read the rest :)

Tori.

The thing didn't fall through because of the pink tie right? And boy am I NOT looking forward to when Alex finds out about the Landon thing... *winces* Great story so far

O.O I have an idea! Now that they can pay everything off, the money that Becky makes can continue to pay the bills, and Mia can work for free to make up for the check. If she works 8 hour shifts, 5 days a week, for 16 1/2 months, she can pay it all back...Maybe that isnt so realistic, but hey. It's an idea.

a million years late, but i just noticed an update, and what a HEATED one. lol i hope you plan to finish this in the long run. I'm already loving it.

WHOA

THIS IS AWESOME

update soon please~

PLEASE

with a cherry on top

and whipped cream

and sexy Alex -ness

_

~Don't forget to smile~

well, I really hope there isn't another two year gap coming up, but, good chapter.

THIS STORY IS AMAZING IM LIKE DYING TO READ MORE PLZ KEEP WRITIN IM BEGGING U SO MUCH

YEA! I'm so glad you updated... I love this story.

i really hope you start doing regular updates it would really make me happy :)

anyway I cant wait to find out what happens with the complex dynamics of Mia's relationship...

your characters are real and believable and there emotions seem to flow easily to the reader

i hope this ends happily [since im a sucker for happy endings]

anyway continue with the updates

Its been way to long... you have to update already specially after this.. haha i mean she gave him an easy task.. that shouldnt be too hard to fullfill hahah

update soon

OMG... This is one of the most hottest stories I have read. Yay, I'm totally addicted. Please continue to write more chapters!