|Reviews for angels amongs us collection|
| Neteri Bennu chapter 2 . 5/30/2008
Wow... that was beautiful. Please do more! i think this was awesome
| mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
ohohwow. this is beautiful. this is so beautiful.
"So you kissed me once,/and though I asked/You wouldn’t tell me why God took away your words;/so I kissed you twice/and gave you mine."
that made my jaw drop. it was so perfect.
yeah, i can't really be coherent about this one. it's that good.
| Butterfly -x- Effects chapter 2 . 4/17/2007
This was just a really perfect chapter.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
god this is beautiful; it's so story-like but.. not.
love the imagery (i can picture this in my head and i want to touch him and the sky); the conversation between the two makes this so... unreal but believable at the same time
"Real beauty comes from pain; there is beauty in a lie." interesting statement; quite poetic (in my opinion)- sounds like one of those phrases/quotes that people insert into stories and essays heh
| Neteri Bennu chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Felt, understood, well done.