Reviews for The Tinder, the Kindling, and the Fuelwood
Jean Brooks chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
I enjoyed reading your story. It's well balanced with descriptions as well as dialogue. I loved how you stated the moral within the kindling's words. Great Job!
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I loved this entire piece, but I think one of my favorite lines was: "Red, orange, and golden tongues leapt with a brilliant flare as the tinder, kindling, and fuelwood began to ponder amongst themselves." That line just really jumped out at me. I like the idea of tinder, kindling, and fuelwood discussing why they do what they do and why they are what they are. This is another very creative piece, and you've done an excellent job with it!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
This is really a good point. I agree that has inspired mankind's imagination for as long as he as used fire. And to this day there is something that touches the soul when you stare into a fire and watch it consume the wood.