This is a very beautiful poem. I really love how you have described things that I have felt; it helps me to relate. :)

'Aimlessly walking Nowhere to go People surround me But no one I know Don't know what's ahead me Or care what's behind A place in this direction Is calling to my mind." Those are the best lines of this. I feel this way whenever I'm surrounded by people I don't know. You captured the mood perfectly.

awesome, i love it! there's another person on here is is just as good as you, their name is Fleur de l'est, and their pretty good. c ya at school... bye!

PILLOW PILLOW PILLOW (sorry, inside joke)

this is a really good poem. I really like how it can be personal to a lot of different people including myself.

I really like this poem a lot. I think it could use a little more punctuation to make it easier to read and pause in the right places, but the rhyme was great.

Sweet, you've managed to rhyme words with a perfect match, in such short lines, very talented, keep writing!

~Lurid~

You did a beautiful job once again!

(TSP)