Reviews for Aimlessly Walking
Lifeshade chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
This is a very beautiful poem. I really love how you have described things that I have felt; it helps me to relate. :)
TwilightButterfly chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
'Aimlessly walking Nowhere to go People surround me But no one I know Don't know what's ahead me Or care what's behind A place in this direction Is calling to my mind." Those are the best lines of this. I feel this way whenever I'm surrounded by people I don't know. You captured the mood perfectly.
jrsparkus chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
awesome, i love it! there's another person on here is is just as good as you, their name is Fleur de l'est, and their pretty good. c ya at school... bye!

PILLOW PILLOW PILLOW (sorry, inside joke)
JaviJavi chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
this is a really good poem. I really like how it can be personal to a lot of different people including myself.
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I really like this poem a lot. I think it could use a little more punctuation to make it easier to read and pause in the right places, but the rhyme was great.
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Sweet, you've managed to rhyme words with a perfect match, in such short lines, very talented, keep writing!

The Monkey King of Pirates chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
You did a beautiful job once again!