Reviews for Love in a Vacuum |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow...she is surrounded by jerks. the principal, her parents. i really like her character though. It's so funny when she's sarcastic, lol. and i would kill to go to a nice boarding school in london, with all those hotties with accents...yum, hahaha. i really like this, and i hope you continue writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... I like aubrey... lets see how this goes.. i'd love to meet james... interesting start...NEXT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far, although I think you should include a prologue or something of her misbehaving. Although the "jump right into the story" tactic works for most stories and undoubtably it'll work for this one as well... its just a suggestion. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter, you have a way of expressing your ideas, its compelling, and if nothing else at least I'll read good writing. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... perhaps another chapter or six will give me a chance to form a real opinion, but so far Aubrey looks like an unusually non-self anylytical character with angst. This could be the start of a very good thing... Erisah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I'm definately interested and I can't wait to read more. You're a good writer and you have a good style or whatever you wanna call it. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() oh my god! i just love this story now. my attitude is just like hers, in a sense of course. i have never had detention or been kicked out of a classroom, but nonetheless i speak before i think. i absolutely can't wait until the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story. seems very promising. hope you update soon! ;) *adds to story alert* |
![]() ![]() ![]() yuck. i just got done reading this extremely awful story... i'm not going to get into the details, but i'm feeling slightly nauseus. FYI, it wasn't your story. No, your story was more like Pepto Bismol for my nausea. Thank you so much for being a competent writer. Your story's good so far. I can't wait to read more. |