THAT'S IT? No! Well, it was very good. It had a cute ending. I hope there's an epilogue!

Very cute ending! I liked how you ended it. It was nice. Kind of strange where you decided to end it though, before the wedding and stuff. But I guess if you're doing an epilogue or sequel it'll make sense. Great work on this story! :D

this was pretty good. I liked it.

~mel

Oh no! I feel the ending has been rushed. Everything was building up to this moment. And I feel it's too quick. Or I guess I've just been too attached to it i want the good part to keep on coming. I really do like the characters, especially Marco. He's just so level-headed. I wish you'd consider a sequel with still them as the main characters.

Oh wow... I didn't thought it to end this way. It's kinda of a quickie but it's good though... not too overly cheesy or anything. Well, nice reading you gave us... and if you can pls write an epilogue or sequel...

HAHA YAY! UPDATE! I love you now!

This is much much better than your previous work regarding Anna and such. I didn't even read a chapter of Anna in training because I found the grammar terrible.

The plot in this story is good and the grammar isn't bad although you tend to switch tenses every now and then. I advice you to get a beta. Or at least proof read.

I'm really waiting for your next chapter. Good job on this story. Update soon.

Poor Irene. Why does Marco ignore her calls to him? I can't believe it...Poor Irene. I hope his family will be okay and safe now. Hurry update soon.

And there goes Marco's cover. Poor Marco. But dizziness will not pass for Irene's reaction; you better put exactly how she scolds/reprimands/emotes in front of Marco, 'k?

UPDATE SOON!

i hope Irene won't blame everything on Marco. I'm sure she'd feel betrayed and that Marco has done the same thing to her. But i hope this won't make her forget that she too committed some mistakes. Coz that's usually the way things turn out in the stories i've read. I'm not sure about the turn of events though. I guess it's just been a long time since the previous update, so on my part i lost the continuity. anyway, hope you'll be able to update soon.

Wow. An earthquake. That was unexpected. I totally didn't see that coming. Update soon! It was great.

So...Irene has discovered that Marco is royal too. Well, well, well, what will happen next? Damn I'm so curious about it. Update soon okay?

*Kisses Nessya*

oh boy! i can see something coming!

interesting. this was good. write more soon

~Mel

yay! she finally figured it out. the earthquake was unexpected though. how tragic :(