Wow, you sure don't like to straggle around. Just get right to the point. I'm sort of sad that there's no drama with Josh because I just love it when guys try to win the girl back. I'm not really feeling it here because what I do know of Josh is that he is not a good person after all.

Oh wow. I thought Josh had a change of heart, but I just knew there was something more there. I can't believe he chose Roxy over Melanie after five freaking years and then lied to her to win her back? Failing miserably!

I like Roxy, other than her sleeping with Josh, there's nothing wrong with her. In fact, if the whole cheating incident was forgotten I would like her.

That was such a cliché ending, I just love to laugh at clichés, no offense. I really can't wait to see Josh's reaction when he meets Carter.

I love how Melanie's dad called her. It shows that he does care and by calling it's showing that he's trying to apologize to her. Why can't Melanie let her father in, it would be a perfect father-daughter relationship.

For the first time, Melanie is not "Daddy's little girl". I love those relationships even if they might be cliché. That connection between a father and a daughter, but I'm not getting it here. Her dad is probably the guy every girl loves. Can't say no to his little girl and loves kids? So, why can't Melanie get along with him? Why did she have to go and ruin their relationship. Probably because he remarried like 5 times.

I kind of like how Josh is fighting for Melanie back, but I'm not sure whether or not he's got an ulterior motive.

Wow, Josh has some real nerve if he's put Melanie through all that crap. He cheats on her, introduces the woman he cheated with, and then wants her back? That is really messed up. I'm super happy that Melanie and Carter met each other again. I didn't expect him to go by his first name. Heck, I thought Carter was his first name!

I have to say that I had my doubts while reading the little summary, but I like it so far. So are Melanie and Carter step-siblings because that's what I'm getting from the flashback in the beginning. If they were step-siblings, glad that their parents are divorcing because I do not like incest stories.

I seriously can't believe what a jerk Josh is. His girlfriend freaking lives in the same hall as him and he dares cheat! He must be super cocky if he can get away with that.

this deserves a standing ovation.

job well done.

I LOVED THE EPILOGUE! It was great how you delved further into the years of their lives. This has to be one of the best stories i've ever read on fictionpress. Trust me i loved Making Him Believe, but this is such a wonderful story. I know this has been up for a very, very long time, but yes, i think it does have a chance of being published. (:

Soo sweet and i absolutely loved it.

I'm quite emotional, not in the emo, cut myself sort of emotional but yeah anyways, the waterworks are already running and it's only the beginning of the talk. Love it. Might i mention Mr. Hakim, is very sweet. He is so Kind.

Heys, this chapter was so so so so AWESOME! I really enjoyed the last bit, how melanie bit back at josh. You know, i can actually see josh as a really realistic and i like that.

What can i say? i enjoyed this chapter a lot and the last bit was the most sweetest bit of all. I could see the scene perfectly in my mind and it made me smile. As stupid as that sounds haha

I love it. I love the way it's written and I LOVE CARTER! he is so awesome (:

Hmmn, I am going to put this on my favorites list. It's sad that Melanie's raunchy, and I do mean raunchy boyfriend couldn't be honest with her. I have to say, I am curious as to how long he'd been cheating on her with this other chick. Jerk.

Your Welcome. I love your ending. It makes the novel seem so real. The endless love they shared was a joy to read at the end and their kids, and grandkids was wonderful to read about. Great Job!

Lucy