Reviews for Solid Ground
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I liked it, except I thought that "new golden leaf" would sound better than "golden new leaf". *shrugs*
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I like it. It just feels true, like we all do that smometimes. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
The line "and disgust that boils in your heart." kind of creeped me out because I got this nasty feeling from it. I can relate a lot though. I seriously loved it, great job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Did you mean "solid" ground? (Or is that annoying to point out?)

When you said "close my eyes and jump" I immediately thought "oh no, suicide". But I'm glad it didn't turn out that way. Nice work as always.

-PQ
Dani P chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
great poem (again) however i think you meant solid not soil ground.