Reviews for Solid Ground |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it, except I thought that "new golden leaf" would sound better than "golden new leaf". *shrugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. It just feels true, like we all do that smometimes. Anyway, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The line "and disgust that boils in your heart." kind of creeped me out because I got this nasty feeling from it. I can relate a lot though. I seriously loved it, great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you mean "solid" ground? (Or is that annoying to point out?) When you said "close my eyes and jump" I immediately thought "oh no, suicide". But I'm glad it didn't turn out that way. Nice work as always. -PQ |
![]() ![]() ![]() great poem (again) however i think you meant solid not soil ground. |