Reviews for Storm
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
YES! I love storms. You've captured that perfectly.
MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Love your haiku! And i agree, i love the rain, and storms. They are beautiful and wild. Love the line "ripped limb from limb" you seem to capture the power in the storm. Great work!

Mirror Mirror
tearing hands chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I like the image of the sky being ripped limb from limb. It seems more like a tornado or a hurricane to me than just rain. Or a really violent thunderstorm. Awesome poem. I love to run in the rain.
Temeraire chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
I like to stand outside during a storm. It's very refreshing, though you tend to get the chills afterwards. I've never thought of a storm in the way that the clouds may be overworking themselves though.

Anyways, good haiku you have here.

-Kazilik
Dani P chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
i love rain too and i love this piece, very original.