Reviews for One Year Anniversary
Andrea Beuficy chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
.god. I love you! Damn.. Haha.. I gotta tell my best friend. She HAS to read this one.
HiHelloMisterBear chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Okay. Things not to do when you are in the middle of class:

Read sad story that make you want to cry.

Eat chips that make noise and your teacher is evil.

I love the story though.
Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
I've read this before, but I didn't review, sorry about that.

personally, I like it better without the scene at the gas station. :) It was so...sad, and by the end of it I had shivers. I really liked this.

outhouse chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
i was planning to read this, say good job, mention i appreciate you took the time to review something of mine, and submit.

i'm crying.

i don't know what to say, because there really isnt anything.
Caffeinated Cupcake chapter 1 . 5/22/2007 beautiful and touching. you did the speech scene exceptionally well. it was very convincing. i know exactly how kevin felt, since i have a friend whose father died suddenly a year ago. i know what those screams and sobs and pounding sound like, and believe me, they burn your heart. that part was well done as well. superb job.
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
What a brilliant read...although I agree with the others about the gas station scene. It's a bit distracting/confusing.

Really touching story though.
Tamara chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
If you took out the scene at the service station with that girl, it would be perfect. Tom's first words should have been 'Hope it's beautiful for you Jay'

Other than that - brilliant.
multiples of six chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
This is beautiful & very moving. The one thing I didn't get was the scene at the gas station.. was it really just some random girl? If so, why did she recognize Kevin? And what did she mean by "It’s not everyday you forget a face like that"? Is he distinctive-looking or something?

Overall I really enjoyed this piece; it's very well written. )
Alex J. Finn chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
This was a well written, empathetic story. I really liked it; it almost made me cry (which is well done coz I don't cry easily with stories/movies).

Yeah. I suppose there's not much else to say.
me chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
oh god mei.

oh god.

that is the most beautiful thing i have ever read.

oh god mei.

oh god now im crying.

mei, you know what's the difference between you and me?

you have feelings

and you use them to make something better,

to make something beautiful.

and i have feelings,

and i bottle them up and cry in my room.

and i snap and i lash out at everyone who tries to get close.

thats the difference.

i love you, okay?

a lot.
heresyisforlosers chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
love the ending

half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Gute nacht

When I read the summary, I just had to read the rest. I don't usually read short-stories on fictionpress because I never seem to have the patience, but this kept me enrapture the entire time. This was written with such amazing detail and such accurate emotions; I felt as if it were really happening to me. The first person also helped with that significantly. I had tears rolling down my cheeks by the end.

Brilliant story. Really. Amazing.

Ki o tsukete nee, tomodachi

voice.writer chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
This made me cry.

I don't think I can say anything else.