I loved this story! The world you've created is fantastic and introduced at good pace. The characters are relatable and likable with their own flaws and strengths. I think you've created an awesome, kick ass protagonist, who can handle themselves in a world full of dangers, and learns to depend on others as well, on her own terms.

Hooked from the first chapter. This is the 3rd time I reread this. I don't have a good memory and I only have a vague idea about what's going on or what's going to happen. I can't wait to get surprised and excited all over again.
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I suck at writing comments. Sorry it's short.

Wow, words cannot express how much I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! A kickass heroine, whose vulnerability is that she cares even though she has burned so many times in the past. Thanatos was a twist I was shocked and found incredibly interesting. It was mentioned a couple times about how during her childhood, she realized something was different especially when she almost drowned. It broke my heart reading how devastated she was to learn she was lied to her entire laugh. Even though he was an overprotective father, it hurts and makes me so angry that he couldn't help her with her shifting.
I loved the contrast with the two men in her life. Leon who always wanted to protect her and always was standoffish but burned hot because of his Alpha status and Edward who was a vampire but cared for her and accepted her for her violent ways. However both guys hurt her so incredibly deeply. I was not expecting Edward to betray her like that! He seemed to want to protect her especially from Xion and healed her several times even though he was under orders to kill her. I love the contrast of Viola's loving to push everyone's buttons but she became a hunter to protect others. It was so sad that she loved her family so deeply and it was her father that also caused the hardest betrayal. The scene between Jack and Vi after she finds out about her father is truly one of the best scenes. Jack who knows her so well and cares for her is trying to keep her from falling apart. She pulls herself together but the broken pieces are there. I have really enjoyed reading this and looo forward to the sequel!

This is the Best story I have read in a long time. You should really think about publishing it. I cannot put it down. I hope you don't mind but I have it saved to my reading list so I can read it out and about or at a later date. You are a Very talented person and should be proud of yourself. The proof reading let's you down slightly but not by much! Please think about a publisher?! I am eagerly making my way through your book interested to see how it all turns out. I will be sorry to finish it.
Thank you for your time and effort with this story and for allowing people to read it.
I hope all is well with you, good day.
Leigh S

Hi there, your story intrigues me so I'm excited to see more of your writing in chapter 2, however I did want to let you know that I do like you writing style and also that your story is flowing wonderfully. I realize that you finished this story over four years ago but I would like to know if you will be finishing the sequel that you've started? - Shelley

Wonderful story! I really liked how well it was written and the darkness of it!

I don't really like the summary. Both alpha and vampire relying on me? Really? It sounds too Mary Sue-ish. But obviously this story is so good that it won FPSSA. Well, maybe i should'nt judge it from it's summary :/

You. Yooooouuuuu. You knew just how to grubs where it hurts. Edward? You axed Edward?! I swear if he doesn't come back as her bonded/girlfriend (and I am convinced that they bonded when he bit her) I will never forgive you. Ever.

Other than that YAY! That was beautiful! I loved it! Good ending too-not impossible yet not an improbably nice ending. I like it. The Edward stunt was skillful too, even if I hated it. And stil do. With a passion. Edward..

I'm off to the sequel. Can't wait!
Thank you for writing these,
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Oh. Shit. This is such a good story. I'll go to sleep and then get back to reading it but I had to stop to say this.

Wow.

The last line made me laugh. Lol. Good story so far...originally I couldn't take Edward seriously because of Twilight. But his character is so far off from the Twilight Edward that it's alright. Lol. Anyways, good job.

Reading this for the 4th time :-)

I just had to read this again...it was just as good as I remembered it...if you ever do an ebook/book version let me know and I will snatch it up no problem:)

:)

i searched sweet miseria up and found that there was a book with the title and summary, but by an author of june something-or-other. Is it a case of plagiarism, or have you published this?

PUBLISH THIS!