Reviews for Sweet Miseria
Charlee Rayne chapter 27 . 1/22/2010
yay! this story was awesome!
renegade01 chapter 27 . 1/15/2010
love it. ripper is such an awesome character. and edward soothing viola with spanish words...jeez. you're killing me here. ;)
RitaHouston chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
in my opinion u aint make her to special i luv her just the way u made her just keep doing what u do i luv this story
readaholicxxx chapter 27 . 1/14/2010
Happy Birthday!

This chapter was especially well written me thinks...I love the way the beginning was set out with the memories and all it was quite clever!

Can't wait for more!
BebeEllis chapter 27 . 1/13/2010
I really like your story at the beginnig but then Viola became too special. She has a leopard, her dad is a legend, she has this awesome power that has not been explained yet and despite all this strength she cannot seem to protect herself. It feels as if you're adding too many abilites to her character and it's tipping her off balance.
RitaHouston chapter 27 . 1/13/2010
i luv this story keep more cuming PLZ and HAPPY BIRTHDAY
pille-ip chapter 27 . 1/13/2010

Well, what do you see, it seems as if it's my birthday or christmas for I'm getting a present too in the form of a new chapter of Sweet Miseria :)

It's interesting, gives a lot of food for my hyperactive Auntie Fantasy ( imagination) and although I have no idea where this story is going (and I just loove the fact that you keep so many possibilities open that I can't just predict) I see a lot of possible hints, pointers and keywords based on which I can see a possible story line running. Yet you keep me on my toes :) I love the anticipation and excitment!
fairy Eva chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the update! And Happy Birthday!
layne chapter 23 . 1/7/2010
This chapter doesn't really make a lot of sense to me. Seems like a lot of drama for her ALMOST being raped. Really, some guy just knocked her around a bit and took off her pants. I don't see what the big deal is, and it's pretty out of character for her to be so rattled by it. Plus, the scene with Jack just wasn't really very realistic. He seemed really adverse to her even knowing who he was at first, then quite easily gave into 'training' her, kind of stupidly quickly. All of the scenes just seemed rushed.
Chocorange888 chapter 26 . 12/29/2009
That was certainly an experience. I was hooked from the moment I started reading this today. It's absolutely amazing, I was so glad to finally read a book with such amazing characters and so much action. It took me a while to get used to the sarcasm in the beginning (because Viola used so much of it!) Nevertheless, I think it just adds more to the story. Thank you so much.
lemontea-addict chapter 26 . 12/28/2009
holy crap so much happening in such a short amount of time! Viola was right in fainting. thats too much info to take in. Especially knowing her true background. haha. i wonder how that will pan out. the thing with the brothers. hmm. i want to know more about them. i hope you update soon! it was a great chapter! keep up the good work!
covertwatch chapter 26 . 12/25/2009
story...too intense...ah! cliffhanger! ahem.

sorry. just had to get that out there. Anyway, this was really good. I'm lovin this twist and I can't wait to see where this is heading.
gracephine chapter 26 . 12/17/2009
wow what a cliffie! ive been MIA for a while but ur story kinda reminds me alot of why i love FP. i love reading original stories and urs defo is!
Kairi-21 chapter 26 . 12/15/2009
ok..lets just say i like this story love this chapter but i am confused...please continue. would like to read more soon
readaholicxxx chapter 26 . 12/15/2009
woah...I definitely wasn't expecting that!
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